One more thing; place a comma after 'month'. Commas help the reader to find the different parts of a sentence, and thus to understand the sentence more easily.
I'm imperfect, but I'm perfectly me, love junk food and life, in love with heaven and spring, addict to cappuccino-fries-chocolate-fashion, geestelijk blijven steken op de leeftijd 20
Dikbaşlı yürüyüşlerin olmalı. Her aşkı feda edebilecekmiş gibi duran çelik bir kalp taşıyormuş gibi asi,umarsız ve ifadesiz bakışlarla yürümelisin... Fakat hiç kimse bir yaprağa gözyaşı dökebilecek olmanı anlamamalı. Güçlü ve direngen yürüyüşlerin olmalı....
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March with capital letter :)
Nice pics though..
Done. Stupid me :idi: (ik maak altijd van die lelijke fouten :D ) Anyways, thank you!
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One more thing; place a comma after 'month'. Commas help the reader to find the different parts of a sentence, and thus to understand the sentence more easily.
Oke teacher :D Done. It's better to use commas, so thank you!
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